Book ‘The First Three Chapters’ Package


The First Three Chapters of Your Project Will Sell Your Book (or Not)


This Package is For You If:

  • You are getting ready to submit your work to a literary agent, a publisher, a grant application, or a competition.


Your ‘First Three’ Mentoring Package Includes:

  • your opportunity to send me the first three chapters of the book you are working on
  • my reading, preparing and reporting time
  • a Zoom meeting (up to 60 mins) with me so that we can go through the feedback together
  • an emailed copy (after our online meeting) of my notes, feedback and suggestions**
  • a mountain of useful information to help you take the next right steps
  • complimentary digital assets and/or working resources, delivered to your inbox
  • lifetime membership* to my private coaching/mentoring/assessment email list, with exclusive content for that group
  • my e-course on how to find the time to write
  • lifetime invitation* to a quarterly Zoom call for all my students, where you can ask me anything, and also (if you want to) connect with other writers who might be writing similar stories to you. (Writing buddies are the best! You might find one here.) 
  • GST, processing fees and printing costs

Your Investment: $550


If you are an NDIS client, you may be eligible to claim your tuition via your funding package if you have goals aligned with, and resources allocated to, improving communication or increasing skills. Please check with your plan manager or with NDIS if you are unsure. Email me for more info.


* “lifetime membership” and “lifetime invitation” means for the duration of the time that I am offering these services… which is hopefully many years
**Please note that my assessment does not include editing services. Editing is an entirely different process. This means, I do not fix your words, sentences, paragraphs, typos, spelling, punctuation or grammar. (Having said that, it is highly likely I will pull out sections of text to demonstrate how you could improve your writing style and fluency.)

Booking Process:

  • Visit my calendar, choose a time that suits you (at least three weeks from now), pay the fee and you’re booked.
  • Make sure you have emailed me your first three chapters at least three weeks before our planned Zoom meeting.
  • We meet via Zoom and go through the feedback.
  • I will then prepare you my notes and email them to you
  • I will add you to my private student list.
  • We can catch up again in the future in my exclusive student Zoom calls.

Come Back for Half Price.

Writers probably spend more time rewriting than writing.

There’s no such thing as a one-draft wonder, and after you’ve finished all your drafts, the in-house publishing team will do even more rounds of editing with you.

You are welcome to rework your first three chapters (of the same manuscript) and book another session to review the changes you’ve made for half price.

Email me and we’ll get it sorted 🙂

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