Your 1st Three Chapters SO important! By the end, the agent or publisher will decide if they will read on… or not.
This package is for you if:
- You are getting ready to submit your work to a literary agent, a publisher, a grant application, or a competition.
- Your ‘First Three’ Mentoring Package Includes:
- your opportunity to send me the first three chapters of the book you are working on AND a one-page synopsis AND a one page query letter, for specialised feedback
- my reading, preparing and reporting time
- a Zoom meeting (up to 60 mins) with me so that we can go through the feedback together
- an emailed copy (after our online meeting) of my notes, feedback and suggestions**
- a mountain of useful information to help you take the next right steps
- lifetime membership* to my private coaching/mentoring/assessment email list, with exclusive content for that group
- FREE access to my e-course on how to find the time to write
- lifetime invitation* to a quarterly Zoom call for all my students, where you can ask me anything, and also (if you want to) connect with other writers who might be writing similar stories to you. (Writing buddies are the best! You might find one here.)
- processing fees and printing costs.
Your Investment: $385
Thank you so much for yesterday and for sending these notes. Your suggestions and line notes are amazing. So much to think about and go through. I am especially impressed since I had the first fifty pages looked at by [an organisation] and your suggestions resonate so much better with me… I have a lot of work to do but am very grateful for your feedback.
(A First 50 Pages client)
“Thank you so, very, much – it was lovely meeting you and thank you for being so gentle and positive with your feedback. I was incredibly trepidatious, and knowing that there is some merit in my attempt at long-form… Well I don’t think I can put into words just how much this means to me!”
(A Full Manuscript Appraisal Client)
If you are an NDIS client, you may be eligible to claim your tuition via your funding package if you have goals aligned with, and resources allocated to, improving communication or increasing skills. Please check with your plan manager or with NDIS if you are unsure. Email me for more info.
* “lifetime membership” and “lifetime invitation” means for the duration of the time that I am offering these services… which is hopefully many years
**Please note that my assessment does not include editing services. Editing is an entirely different process. This means, I do not fix your words, sentences, paragraphs, typos, spelling, punctuation or grammar. (Having said that, it is highly likely I will pull out sections of text to demonstrate how you could improve your writing style and fluency.)
Booking Process:
- Email me to make a time: hello@josephinemoon.com
- We’ll make a time for you to send through your work and a schedule
- We meet via Zoom and go through the feedback.
- I will then finish my notes (‘the report) and email them to you
- I will add you to my private student list.
- We can continue to catch up again in the future in my exclusive student Zoom calls.
