“Thank you for the trouble you took to give my novel a close read and to write a comprehensive report. Your feedback is invaluable and after been stuck for more than a year, can now see a way forward. You were generous with your time and talents and I appreciate this very much.” ~ Full Manuscript Assessment Client

The first 50 pages of your manuscript is a commonly requested amount to submit to a publisher, agent or literary competition.

• Your first chapter is important. Is it enough to keep people reading?

• The first three chapters are maybe even more crucial. By the end of the first three chapters, you’ll either have hooked your reader or not. If it’s a literary VIP reading it, those first three chapters are the most you’ll get out of their attention before they give up.

• And the first fifty pages? If the VIP has read all the way to that point, they’re interested. If the first fifty pages just keep on getting better, that’s gold. If the first fifty pages has them dying to know what will happen next, even better.

If you have been lucky enough to be invited to send the first 50 pages in, you don’t want to waste that shot.

This package is for you if:

You are getting ready to submit your work to a literary agent, a publisher, a grant application, or a competition.

Your ‘First 50 Pages’ Package Includes:

• your opportunity to send me the first 50 pages of the book you are working on AND a one-page synopsis AND one-page query letter for specialised feedback
• my reading, preparing and reporting time
• a Zoom meeting (up to 60 mins) with me so that we can go through the feedback together
• an emailed copy (after our online meeting) of my notes, feedback and suggestions**
• a mountain of useful information to help you take the next right steps
• complimentary digital assets and/or working resources, delivered to your inbox
• lifetime membership* to my private coaching/mentoring/assessment email list, with exclusive content for that group
• FREE access to my e-course on how to find the time to write
• lifetime invitation* to a quarterly Zoom call for all my students, where you can ask me anything, and also (if you want to) connect with other writers who might be writing similar stories to you. (Writing buddies are the best! You might find one here.) 
• processing fees and printing costs
  

Your Investment: $690

If you are an NDIS client, you may be eligible to claim your tuition via your funding package if you have goals aligned with, and resources allocated to, improving communication or increasing skills. Please check with your plan manager or with NDIS if you are unsure. Check with your plan and/or plan manager and/or email me to discuss.

* “lifetime membership” and “lifetime invitation” means for the duration of the time that I am offering these services… which is hopefully many years
**Please note that my assessment does not include editing services. Editing is an entirely different process. This means, I do not fix your words, sentences, paragraphs, typos, spelling, punctuation or grammar. (Having said that, it is highly likely I will pull out sections of text to demonstrate how you could improve your writing style and fluency.)

Booking Process:

• Email me hello@josephinemoon.com to make a time.
• You can then send me your 1st 50 pages 
• We’ll make a time to meet via Zoom and go through the feedback.
• I will then finish off my notes and email them through to you.
• I will add you to my private student list.
• We can catch up again in the future in my exclusive student Zoom calls.

I can’t wait to help you reach your dreams!

Jo x